Tuesday, 24 February 2015

Maybe Another??

I feel like writing another poem, and I've been crocheting a lot lately so that's my inspiration since I wanna do that instead of all my homework. Anyways, here it is

It starts with a ball of soft yarn
it starts with a hook
and a pattern

The yarn slides through my fingers
the hook wraps and pulls
and a ball rolls across the floor

It's about creating
it's about relaxation
and yarn

There's so many hooks
there's so many colours
and I can't choose



I kind of have a pattern going, but it's not really to with rhyme as it is to do with structure, but I'm sure that's obvious. Once again, I didn't really get at what I was trying to do, but I still kinda like it. 


1 comment:

  1. Cool! I've tried to learn crochet probably three times now, and I can't seem to get the hang of it. I guess I'll stick to knitting for now.

    I think you're off to a pretty good start. As a knitter, I can relate to a lot of this (relaxing, ball of yarn rolling across the floor). The actions and physical details work well ( The yarn slides through my fingers / the hook wraps and pulls). Maybe you could try adding more to make it more personal? Like what does crocheting mean to you, or maybe there is a special reason why you decided to pick it up.

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